tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-812018966351611184.post8823940179325375749..comments2023-11-01T20:47:31.250+05:30Comments on the short story blog: The TouristAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17127516991679094481noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-812018966351611184.post-66667460828887400352013-03-14T17:01:26.690+05:302013-03-14T17:01:26.690+05:30Good to know some good things but nothing!!Good to know some good things but nothing!!Selvakumar Nagulanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03703859252278464644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-812018966351611184.post-3014990298132659092013-01-29T09:25:51.805+05:302013-01-29T09:25:51.805+05:30I dig this story. And the mentioned of Quentin had...I dig this story. And the mentioned of Quentin had me, good work.<br /><br />I'm also a short story writer. Mine are mostly crime fiction. <br /><br />http://thepanopticonchronicles.comVerge Le Noirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02641937997743822073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-812018966351611184.post-49810401882529890872012-08-20T11:42:50.137+05:302012-08-20T11:42:50.137+05:30I enjoyed your short story 'The Tourist."...I enjoyed your short story 'The Tourist." It held my attention from beginning to end. <br /><br />Please read my short story 'The Extraterrestrial Life Form' at<br /><br />http://socyberty.com/paranormal/the-extraterrestrial-life-form/<br /><br />Thanks!<br />johnmariowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15870470634745666464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-812018966351611184.post-71782663175487167662012-06-01T12:31:54.971+05:302012-06-01T12:31:54.971+05:30Awesome blog. I am impressed.
I want to share my ...Awesome blog. I am impressed. <br />I want to share my stories website also Shortstorylovers.com and Shortnscarystories.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-812018966351611184.post-84633788418747805802012-05-30T16:35:16.186+05:302012-05-30T16:35:16.186+05:30Totally Loved It. I read somewhere that we reflect...Totally Loved It. I read somewhere that we reflect each other - every one of us. I know you do. The story has everything love - Madras (no, not Chennai), the corner-of-the-street Ganesha temple, Santiago de Compostella (I know I will make the St James' Way, someday, soon), Kill Bill, and ... Thank you for sharingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-812018966351611184.post-47161798712415556832012-03-25T09:41:19.327+05:302012-03-25T09:41:19.327+05:30You said you accepted criticism, so here goes:
I ...You said you accepted criticism, so here goes:<br /> I thought you jumped around too much. There was no point to the story, it went from belief in God to killing children to Kill Bill. It needs to have a clear purpose. Also, you may be overusing the three periods ... It felt like all the characters were cutting each other off. The dialogue format was interesting, though it left a lot of holes in the setting. You made some good statements about religion that make people think, but honestly this story needs a lot more work.Calhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06372312272390219630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-812018966351611184.post-51887811589108643222012-03-06T05:04:15.572+05:302012-03-06T05:04:15.572+05:30Nice work !! I like the dialogue format.
Check ou...Nice work !! I like the dialogue format.<br /><br />Check out my short story, ''Iphigenia''<br />http://alexbh.blogspot.comAlex B.H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/14302649288118748851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-812018966351611184.post-56121362752359418952012-03-04T13:06:23.013+05:302012-03-04T13:06:23.013+05:30hi,check my blog,i have nominated u for an awardhi,check my blog,i have nominated u for an awardPrabhavathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06896918573416384680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-812018966351611184.post-35113635517568120962012-02-21T05:20:22.569+05:302012-02-21T05:20:22.569+05:30You're a great writer! Do you mind visiting my...You're a great writer! Do you mind visiting my writing blog and giving me advice? Thanks!<br /><br />http://thegardenofstories.blogspot.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com